Concrete Hell
FantasyHe remembers his death, but also the exact moment he woke again. His body is corroded by jobs that will never appear on a résumé, a smile full of holes, and a gaze that no longer seeks escape, but meaning. He was reborn in a Latin American city where hell has no flames: there is concrete, noise, and pollution breathed like punishment.
Every day, Dante crosses invisible circles with his wired headphones on, the kind that tangle like his thoughts. He walks among graffiti-covered walls that don’t decorate, they warn. One of them, the sharpest and cruelest, whispers without a voice: “Abandon all hope, you who enter here.”
He wakes before dawn not by choice, but by necessity. His half-asleep body throws itself into the ritual of public transport: lines that don’t move, buses that never arrive, drivers who don’t look. Each journey is a test of faith, each stop a penance. In this circle, time is not linear—it stretches, breaks, and mocks. He is pushed not only by the masses, but by forces beyond his control: traffic and indifference.
He enters a government office—does it matter which? Health, housing, education, or justice; all have the same wall color, the same tone of voice, the same clock that marks nothing. He sits and waits. The system does not recognize him. He hands over papers, the process does not proceed, others are missing, the signature invalid, the stamp absent. He lines up again, and the appointment is canceled. The people around him dissolve, while he listens to the same song for the third time without realizing it. Outside, the sun begins its course. The second circle.
He does not run, for he learned that running draws attention. But he walks with tense shoulders, lowered gaze, and alert ears. There are streets where he must turn off the music even with headphones on. In his neighborhood, fear is atmosphere. Sirens announce nothing new, fights are like background crickets, neighbors no longer greet, and children learn to sing narcocorridos before they learn to read. They sing in circles.
Dante has felt ill, and though the pain has lasted weeks, going to the health center is another form of exhaustion. He has an appointment, yet still waits among crying babies and elderly people asleep in broken plastic chairs. When finally called, the doctor does not look at him, asks quickly, writes without listening, prescribes without explaining. Dante nods, takes the paper, and leaves. Outside, there is almost no sun, nor medicine in that old pharmacy. Inside, the illness persists in vicious circles. The fourth circle.
Dante works only because not working would be worse. That day he changed his shift to the evening to attend the health center. At work there is no recognition, only tasks that repeat, bosses who don’t look, and wages that don’t suffice. Time is not measured in hours, but in deliveries. Fatigue is not acknowledged, it is demanded. And though Dante cannot wear headphones, he hears the repetitive sound of machines, keys, voices that order without asking. Sometimes he wonders what this rhythm is called: the fifth circle.
Dante wants to learn, but every attempt returns him to the same place: overcrowded classrooms, tired teachers, content that does not dialogue with his life. If he seeks alternatives, he finds prices: “Finish high school in 3 months,” courses that promise a future but charge for the present; “Looking for a well-paid job?” private schools offering excellence and scholarships that don’t apply to his age; “Get your 80% scholarship.” Education has become merchandise, and Dante is not a client. Only part of the circle.
He is always online, but his phone vibrates more than his body. He receives messages, notifications, alerts—but few words that name him. He posts on social media, comments, replies, but there is no love. His story is told by others. He checks his profiles like one checks a wound—not to heal it, but to confirm it is still there. It doesn’t matter if it’s three in the morning or if the circular dance of the sun is about to begin in the sky.
He wakes late on his day off, goes out for a walk but does so indebted—not only to banks, but to promises never fulfilled. He looks suspiciously behind shop windows, as if the displays knew his balance. The lights seduce him, but he no longer falls easily. He knows every offer hides a trap, every discount a disguised debt. Sometimes he enters, not to buy, but to remember what it feels like to desire without fear. But even that has become expensive. He walks in circles through those endless malls.
Dante ends his day off in a cantina, speaking with strangers—not for conversation, but for necessity. There are experiences one must cross alone, and there are hells that are not literary, but concrete. And sometimes death is paradise. He laughs out loud, drunk, until he loses his phone and headphones, as if the city stripped away the last thread keeping him connected. And then—no messages, no music, no alerts. Only him.





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